love how you used the glitch effect with the wingdings! i think maybe "Eldritch Inc" could stay a little longer on the screen, as well as the logo! i recall in the critique you mentioning possibly taking out the bars towards the end, which i think would work well, as well as give you more time for both the logo and the name to stay on screen. you could also then have the logo shrink down into that line in your outro, which I love, and works well with the whole glitch concept I think
love how you used the glitch effect with the wingdings! i think maybe "Eldritch Inc" could stay a little longer on the screen, as well as the logo! i recall in the critique you mentioning possibly taking out the bars towards the end, which i think would work well, as well as give you more time for both the logo and the name to stay on screen. you could also then have the logo shrink down into that line in your outro, which I love, and works well with the whole glitch concept I think
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